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Show me sloughed off
       tramp's back bent
       from teeming lovelack
       overspent
your credit? Next time
       sure as hell
       you'll get dirt payment
       back as well
       as sunken eyelids
       underslept and
teeth like tombstones
       barely kept.
if you can
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flounderinga's avatar
I like the play of the lines on one another. By that I mean, for example, that "overspent" is both a part of the previous and next line's narratives, but in two distinct ways.